Comments on: Bad, Bad Writing http://maricarmac.com/2010/04/bad-bad-writing/ Sat, 14 May 2011 16:28:57 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.5 hourly 1 By: Maricar http://maricarmac.com/2010/04/bad-bad-writing/comment-page-1/#comment-792 Maricar Fri, 21 May 2010 23:53:17 +0000 http://maricarmac.com/2010/04/bad-bad-writing/#comment-792 Hi Sarah! Isn't it funny what we put in our first drafts? You're so right that we should be thankful for revisions! :) Hi Sarah! Isn’t it funny what we put in our first drafts? You’re so right that we should be thankful for revisions! :)

]]> By: Sarah P http://maricarmac.com/2010/04/bad-bad-writing/comment-page-1/#comment-757 Sarah P Mon, 03 May 2010 19:25:13 +0000 http://maricarmac.com/2010/04/bad-bad-writing/#comment-757 Fantastic! I finished my manuscript in March and am working on revisions as well. Funny that you mentioned this 'with her hands' line. I've been chopping all sorts of stupid things like that too. Looking with her eyes, touching with her hands. It's ridiculous the things that actually make it into the first draft. Thank God for revising! :) Sarah Fantastic! I finished my manuscript in March and am working on revisions as well. Funny that you mentioned this ‘with her hands’ line. I’ve been chopping all sorts of stupid things like that too. Looking with her eyes, touching with her hands. It’s ridiculous the things that actually make it into the first draft. Thank God for revising! :)

Sarah

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